I think thats the reason why most articles about fictional characters start with a ConceptDesign section, and then cover fictional details in an Appearances section. This would give the article a better real-world introduction before it starts covering fictional details. The Design section, along with the corresponding design changes of the character. Ill try to rewrite some paragraphs if I have some time this week. I would go through the article, re-read the sources that are quoted, and either summarize or just remove quotes that arent distinctive, interesting or important. This produces the flavour of a hastily written piece of tabloid journalism. Why do those ordinary words have to be a quote and what does the director mean exactly There and in several other places, it feels as though quoting is offered in lieu of understanding. There are several uses of as instead of because or some other word I would go through the article and change that (rewrite the sentences as appropriate).įor example: Claire Redfield had already been chosen for Resident Evil Code: Veronica (2000), meaning Valentine was the only suitable character remaining. Some of the issues werent actually resolved, she just chose to cease replying to the discussion. Its hard even for me to do something like that, as Im not familiar with the granularity of the sources and dont want to Resident Evil Jill Eye Color By lesquisesrant1970 Follow | Public
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